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When Gummi was young, she was short and small
Outside of her cave she was not allowed to go
She dreamt of the woods beyond her home
She wanted to see where the river does flow
She took one step out, against the rule and to everyone she was new
She met some of her kind and some that were not
Some big and grey
Some small and green.
Some way up high, spotty and yellow
Some furry and brown, hiding in the trees;
Running up and down, doing as they please
Her favourite kind, so gentle and sweet;
Was her friend whom now we'll meet
Dark brown in colour was his soft fuzzy hair
He was a rabbit often mistaken for a hare
Eating carrots was his habit
Indeed, he did not share!

Now in present time, they meet outside her cave,
Which you could say was once a day
He shared those carrots he did crave;
As they watched the stars, under the tree they lay
What they did not see beyond those trees;
Were two eyes of a mother who wasn't very pleased.
She called her husband, the most frightening bear among all;
That is him, the father of Gummi.
Not a moment was thought through, he seperated the two.
Though both were brown and both had fur.
Though both lived in the forest and walked on all four.
The two were different.
Their friendship forbidden.
However, it does not end here...

The story continues, but Gummi isn't sure how,
So I'll write to you later.
For now, its ciao.
Thank you for taking the time to read.

Made to enter a little competition just so I could take the opportunity of using my username. (:
Turned out a little like Romeo and Juliet without an ending. xD

Disclaimer: Above image is not mine. I just thought it represents my story nicely. Sorry for any confusions. >_<
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:icontanukitagawa:
TanukiTagawa Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
:bulletwhite:You chose a cute image to your story,that also have a good opening. 8-)
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Gummi-Bear-07 Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. (:
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:icontanukitagawa:
TanukiTagawa Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012
:bulletwhite:You´re welcome! :D
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digitalalltheway Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful rendition of Rabbit and Bear. Love your color scheme. The drawing is exceptional in my estimation. Everything about it is a Class A Act = to 10 out of 10.

And, your story that accompanies your wonderful drawing is just perfect. I LOVE it!

Hope Gummi's story turns out well. Hope you win the contest. Good Luck!
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Gummi-Bear-07 Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.. omg, the image isn't mine though I wish it were. >_<
I could draw that but still, its not mine and I don't have the time to draw something either so I Google'd something that goes with this drawing and and I forgot to write the disclaimer. :S

Thank you about the story though.
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digitalalltheway Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconsmile--plz:
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